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Under the Red Sky

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Under the Red Sky

'Ere the day died calmly down
Danced they under skies of frown
White skin so soft as to enthrall
A sky of blood afore th'evenfall
Not One could conceal the pain
Shared,at last together,again
They'd embrace their full moon
And together softly croon
Their song to the sea
Of their love decree
Not to wither,
Never to pass.
A poem about the reunification of two people. Its mostly just another descriptive poem. Maybe it has a deeper meaning- Who cares? This time,i deliver no further comment. Enjoy =)
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Ambra-Lioness's avatar
This is a very beautiful poem, it just conjurs this image of a couple dancing in a beach with just the setting sun to illuminate their movements and figures

You have beautiful imagery but it's not always so clear what exactley is happening with the characters or what their story is, except that they love each other eternally. :)